Ella woke up in her bedroom. It felt like a normal day till a big band as loud as thunder crashed the air as fire flooded the house. She could see her parents running as fast as they could but the fire swept them away. She ran as fast as she could to the lake. She looked back and saw one hundred dragons swooping down. They were big as whales. She screamed as more fire swooped over the land faster and faster. She dove into the lake with a splash. As she swam through the water, more dragons swooped from the sky. They were coming for her. The last thing she saw before it went black was wings.
WOW! Great writing Oscar!!! I am so proud of you!:):)